Here it comes

Guess what.

As the shadows grow tall,
And the blue turns red,
Here it comes, the calming, balmy evening.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I love balmy evenings in summer. The heat in the colour of the sky matches the temperature. Sunsets are wonderful.

Chris

[Kari Rakitan]

This is short but very delightful. I think it would make a nice mantra for the end of the day.

[Anastasia McKenzie-Polk]

Even with little words, you can feel the building suspense. This was beautifully written.

[CJ43223]

I like it. the expression that captures the whole atmosphere. Effective and on point :)

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed ;-]

[Lacey Sue]

Today I started my job and I guess I came home to find out things I didn't want to find out.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

What happened?

[Carina Baumert]

A poem about looking out at the sunset, while having yourself a nice relaxing drink. Well done!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much Carina :)

[wordman]

sounds kinda serene a sweet lady by your side and an exotic drink

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you Wordman for your beautiful review and interpretation.

[wordman]

you`re welcome