Till Eternity

It's hard to say Goodbye
Never knowing we'll say Hi
However long we're Apart
I'll always be there in your Heart

Reviews

[Nicole Schuster]

Short and sweet. Love it.

[micaelashelby]

Beautiful work. The rhythm flows perfectly. It is short yet it captures the reader instantly. Wonderful.

[M P Ramesh]

DEVI,
How else can a writer say such a sincere farewell. Thats why we say that the appropriate diction finds its role at the time needed through HIM/HER. A writer could have set aside such infatuations of hearbreaking words . But otherwise he/she can not sleep well. Its the fate which dictates such moments.

A charming piece
carry on...............


M P Ramesh

[Rye]

touching, very nice....it flows well.