Run down mind

Misery...

I have a run down mind, from all this drama you left behind.

Stuck with me day by day,

 

That's when I go insane!

I am ready to walk, but it is dark.

 

Run down mind, from all this drama you left behind.

 

Your words run through my mind,

you say you would never hurt me again!

You told me, you will love me until the end!

 

Then I say to myself:

If that where true, then why does my heart feel like its turning blue?

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

I like what is being said without being said. I like what more is being said than just what is being said. The colon caught me off guard though. It caused me to stop, not pause - not slow - but stop, like the best period wish it could. I am not sure why it did. It is not really the nature of a colon to do that, so you can probably ignore me saying that unless six billion other people say the same - but then again, you should still ignore it - you wrote it - not us....

[Display Name]

Run down mind, keep writing and I will keep reading,, nice, simple, poem.