LIFE OF A POET IN LOVE

She got me all day drowned in poetry,
Mesmerised by metaphors,
Swimming in similes,
Riddling to rhymes
Asleep in acrostics
and drenched in ink!,
All so trying to explain
my feelings to
Her beauty,
Her uniqueness,
No,.....
Just Her unexplainable
Angelness.

Reviews

[Karen]

Clearly you have a Muse that keeps you enamored and inspired, and equally as clearly, you know your poetic terms and are well-versed! You are indeed "all day drowned in poetry"!

[Nkosana B Masuku]

You interpreted it very well.Thank you for reading,Appreciate it

[Anand Sehgal]

Very neat work. Nice words. Liked it thoroughly.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thanks for reading and i'm glad you liked it.

[Lydia Shutter]

The adoration in this write is powerful. I liked the mention of all the poetic terms...simile, metaphor, rhyme, acrostic! Very effective tool. The term "angelness" is so unique and so descriptive. Well written poem of love. Lydi**

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Lydii,was begining to miss your comments.Appreciate a lot but i was not quite sure on the title,any suggestions?

[Lydia Shutter]

Just "A poet in love" would be fine....and there is nothing wrong with your title as it is either!

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you :)

[Cassie]

Wow..the last line...wow!!!! just her unexplainable angelness

[Nkosana B Masuku]

lol did it sweep you off your feet?

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

It seems you surely did sweep her off her feet...another great piece buddy...pen on.

[Holly Mason]

like your expression in this write
thank you for sharing

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you holly for takin the time to read and reviewing