Walking the Red Line

In a child's mind who knows what completely goes on?

                                               Walking the Red line

 

This is me, I am walking this way.

I will say things that I won’t want to say,

Is this me?

I hear that one day I shall be free,

But I am spinning so fast in the mirror that I can’t even see me.  

Am I supposed to be?

Should I let the demons rise among me?

 

            -Anique H.

               007

Author's Note

This poem was wrote by my 9 year old daughter. She also co-authored
Darkness of the Shadow. I'm proud of her and when you read the next generation of writers please comment, it would help her to continue to exceed her talents.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

An amazing write for A 9 YEAR OLD...BRAVO

[Dez H.]

Right on she'll be happy for the compliment.

[Sami Khalil]

You are all welcome...:)..................

[Dez H.]

hi its anique i just want to thank you so much this is my first poem i have written songs but i put every-thing in it i co authored in darkness of the shadows thank you.

sincerely,
anique

[B-poet]

Great job Anique. You've found the poetry well within yourself. You can keep going back to it as often as you like. Great job and keep up the great creative work. :)