ABUSE

This was something i wrote 6 years ago......

I COULDN'T BREATH
I COULDN'T SPEAK
I COULDN'T DO ANYTHING

YOU PUSHED ME
YOU SLAPPED ME
YOU EVEN THREATIN TO KILL ME

THE LOVE I HAD FOR YOU BLINDED ME
IT MADE ME BLIND TO THE REAL YOU
YOU KEPT ME SECLUDED

I COULDNT HAVE ANY CONTACT WITH ANYONE
I DROPPED OUT OF SCHOOL FOR
I QUIT MY JOB FOR YOU

BUT ALL YOU DID WAS MAKE ME BLEED
YOU GAVE ME A BUSTED LIP
YOU GAVE ME A BLACK EYE

WHEN I ASKED YOU WHY
ALL YOU COULD SAY WAS BECAUSE OF LOVE
IT TOOK ME AWHILE TO BREAK AWAY

BREAK AWAY FROM THE PAIN
BREAK AWAY FROM THE HEARTACHE
BREAK AWAY FROM THE POISON

YOU ABUSED ME
YOU TORMENTED ME
 YOU MADE ME FEEL LIKE I WASN'T GOOD
BUT NOW I'M FREE

FREE FROM YOUR BULLSHIT
FREE FROM YOUR TORMENT
FREE FROM YOUR ABUSE

Reviews

[Wandering Violet]

Very powerfully written, obviously it came from deep within you and had to be expressed.

[Thycudides]

Very powerful, however I would just suggest that you replace the word "bullshit", and you say "threatin" instead of "threatened". But other than that, not too bad.

[Dove]

This is great, I can feel the emotion and the heart that was put into this. You did a fantastic job on this piece.

[Alewis]

this is very emotional but also a great write good job