Choas

Pain & Loneliness

 

 

I live at the corner of despair and misery and as I walk the worn

paths of my past I feel the silence tear what little mind

and resolve I have left rising out my body as my soul silently cries

 

The clouds of chaos circle my heart and my head feels

heavy I look at this marble I live on and wonder

will it get better for me, for humanity

 

I walk the streets and I see people that look like me

and ask my soul do they feel my pain, my soul

cries in rivers and streams of pain a resounding yes

 

Falling to my knees and thank god that I am indeed human

As the night falls I see there on the steps to my home,

my lonely heart and shadow talking oh to know what they are saying

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

lonliness has also given me much insight :)
Peace
Robin

[Goodbye]

Very emotional, dripping with such loneliness, such isolation...Very relatable write.

[Bubo]

Sometimes we so need others to see and feel are pain........heartbreaking poem, to feel loved is something that chases loneliness away.........very emotional writing.