Gaping River

River, river by the sea

Don't you hear my cries?

River, river won't you be

The one big surprise?

River, river wash my tears.

River, river please.

I hear the white wash in my ears,

Why is all you do is tease?

Oh river, river, my river, please

Your stride is so long,

Surely you have advice for me?

River, river I am so far gone.

Oh river, I am in pain.

So hear me now, okay?

I'm not sure I'm here to stay

In your kingdom by the spray.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

This is terrific! Heart felt and beautiful! I enjoyed the repetition as well, in this
case it was perfect! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Dindella]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. Bless you, too!