Goodbye Jon

Poem about my friend who moved away a while back. I wrote a while back but I thought I would share it

Why Is What He Ask Him Self EveryDay
Why Couldn't He Just Stay
It Will Never Again Be The Same Now That He's Gone
We All Love You Jon

All That Is Left Are Memories
All I Ask Is For You To Visit,Please
I Can't Imagine Your Pain
Without You Jon,Everything Is Plain

You Must Have It The Worse,Having To Adapt
I Feel Really Sorry For That
I Can't Help But Cry When I Think Of It
Your Seat Is Still Open Jon,No One Else Can Sit

We All Miss You Johnathan
Jessica,Hunter,Amanda,We Talk About You When We Can
Me,Chris,Even Cody,We All Miss You
About Tear's We All Shed A Few

No Need To Hide Our Emotions
The Tear's Flow Fast Like Raging Ocean's
Jon Your A Brother To Us All
We Want To Talk Yo You,Give You A Call

I Couldn't Look At One Photo
If I Did Tear's Began To Flow
We All Know It Wasn't Your Choice
We Would Do Any Thing To Hear Your Voice...

Reviews

[Jonathan Oden]

THANKS!!!

[Cassandra D.]

This is a very touching poem.
It's always sad when a friend you care about so much moves away.
The poem was very nice.
The ending, I liked. With the last two lines in a rhyme, the poem ends with a great flow.
Very well written.

[Annabel Lee]

this is so sweet :-) good poem!

[Luna]

It always hurts when someone you really care about moves. especially when you never have a chance to say goodbye. it is very well written. thank you for posting it.

[misha]

Friends that move away hurt. It has happened to me. Most of the time I'm the one moving. Very touching poem

[Jane Doe]

awwwww this is sooo cute
i luvvv ut soooooooo much
luv iiit
luv ya
peace out abbie