A nap forever

Sleep, if you must...make sure you are not disturbed then

Hundreds of them were looking at you. A crowd, confused and murmuring. I made them stop.

I said "She is calm enough so as not to breathe".

Author's Note

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Reviews

[priya]

I actually agree with Avinash..you trully have a vivid perspective and a beautiful imagination..

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks again Priya...reviews mean a lot

[Jeffrey David]

You have a very unique and wonderful gift...

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Thanks Jeffrey

[Avinash]

This small piece can be turned into a painting. I wonder if you can paint as well. The imagery is vivid and abstract writing seems to be your signature style it seems. Looking forward to more writings from you.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

I do prefer abstract writing. Getting a boy and a girl and making them love or breaking them up at the end with flushed out sentiments is just not my cup of tea...

As for painitng, neot quite good at it but yes, i do paint.

And thanks again for the review. Reviews really help.

[Dipanjan Dutta]

And what seems to be abstract in my writing is actually not abastract but a reality that mostly goes unobserved

[Avinash]

I really appreciate your craft.

[suchitra sarmah]

is this a story?i am just confirming

[Dipanjan Dutta]

I didn't get you...are you asking me to change the genre or asking if its a real life incident???read moreI didn't get you...are you asking me to change the genre or asking if its a real life incident???

Well, if its the second one, then no...its not real

[suchitra sarmah]

No I am not asking you to change the genre..I am asking you if its any real incident or what

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Well then..there is no such real incident I know of...the situation just occured in my mind