Someday life will be better

I see you
Crying
Now I am
Dying
Fighting to cheer you up
Fighting to change your luck
You can tell me what's wrong
I'll try to help you stay strong
I'll always listen to you
And try to help you get through
You can always trust me
And I'll help you to see
Someday life will be better

Reviews

wow, that was amazing. i loved the emotion. even if it may have been used before you made it your own. nice.

[Jeff]

Everyone has probably said something that someone else has said. Don't worry about it. It's a good piece.

[Dische]

It was for me I didn't realize that it has been used so much sorry

[LeatisGraves]

Ah, this isn't a bad poem, though it falls under the label of 'generic' a little too well. The phrase 'I see you, Crying, Now I am, Dying' I have seen many times, almost too many. Though I respect you had the confidence to post this, I cannot fully say that its wholly original.