Without

Missing out on him.

A hunger to learn,

a hunger for thought.

A lost battle,

a trained dog.

A blank paper without a spot,

a blinking eye without water.

A me without you,

is drained body of depression.

And a me without progression.

Reviews

[Robin]

great emotion and the underlying psychology expressed here , raw and lean

[Rachel Koepke]

i think its hard to tell a story and put so much emotion into such a short piece...yet you do it soo well, its amazing

[Adam :P]

I love your poems. this one is also amazing.

[serpent]

its amazing that how these short peices end up conveying so powerfully the loss of love...i liked the way you have captured almost all the feelings that follow soon after we lose someone we are love dearly.

nicely penned!