Anger

Angry at those people with stupid accusations

Dirty and unkept

Keep my name outta your mouth 

You nameless jerk-offs

Author's Note

I am Kinda mad

Reviews

[Joiedevivre]

! I like this.

[Robin]

such is the beauty of the senryu form , direct and poetic .

[Thomas Roarty]

One of the shortest works I've seen. However that's the best part about it, it's sharp like the edge of a knife. I can definatly sense the anger and resentment from this.

[Rachel Koepke]

very strong....I can feel your anger through this piece...

[Frank F. Atanacio]

to the point of anger :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

love the biting edge~ nice solid senryu!~

[serpent]

strong words.... m sure people the write is pointing at pissed you off to the core.

[I Am Svetlana]

Haha, such great emotion in this poem. And yes, people who tend to make accusations tend to piss us off to the end. They push us to the edge, so they kinda deserve a little cuss-out.

[Solidad]

*grinning from ear to ear*