Stars With Destiny

Stars With Destiny

A Poem by DizzyLlama

Time pulls it's transfixed pulse of voids consolated into a gigantic absence. This spoken drama playes as if it is broken down syllable by syllable. I don't know what to do. I left my mind for one hell of a ride, now what do I have to show? My skills harnessed so unique, now they lost their wau home. I must go searching for the parts I scattered through the world.

© 2015 DizzyLlama


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Interesting paragraph, I'm not sure I understand the premiss of your story line but it sounds very cool when I read it out loud. I could see this being developed into a heck of a story. Thank you for posting and allowing us to read your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


DizzyLlama

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the tine to read and comment on my work! I always enjoy others opinions about w.. read more

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Added on June 26, 2015
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