Exhale

The sky looks small & helpless today.

I hold my breath & bite my tongue

fearing that with one exhale

the whole world might float away.

Reviews

[Lee E. Powell]

Hmmm, i liked this one alot!

"The sky looks small & helpless today"
Not sure what you were saying here... does it mean everything is closing in around you? something like that?

I know nothing at all about poetry, if i did, i would probably be able to give a much better review. i can say thought that I really enjoyed this piece.

Lee