This is My Lesson to You

When things go wrong,

Your world will turn cold...

 Please  stay strong!

And hold on to hope.

It can always get worse,

And life will accommodate.

I know it ain't fair

But learn to appreciate.

Turn empty pans upside-down,

And create your own beat.

Hit it hard using your anger,

But never give in to defeat.

When you are tired...DANCE.

You never know how much you can take.

Only pushing yourself you'll realize

The difference another step can make.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Quite motivational! A good reminder to go the extra mile. Two little notes: "And hold on to hope".....how about 'And on to hope hold" (that way you land the rhyme rather than cheat it....just a thought); "Hit it hard using your anger" is a bit of a mouthful...."with" instead of "using" might work better. Otherwise, you def have a gem here. Well done!

[Jessica Lima]

Yeah... I am taking a break from my morbid pieces lol. Thank You

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this poem could make a change...it's so good to read and i just imagine...what if people would read it once?....how thought provoking it is and such a positivity it spreads!

[Surya]

Ohh, just a second, thanking you for giving a wonderful message...
Your words are true, one should face everything instead of sobbing.....
I loved it...:)

[Jessica Lima]

If life gives you lemons... make lemonade!

[Surya]

haha, Sure ....:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

An encouraging poetry, very good thoughts, and very well written..loved your work

[Jessica Lima]

Thank You so much. I can write pretty dark stuff from time to time. I thought it was time to do something uplifting.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah, that's good decision

[Stacy Purvis]

This is powerful and uplifting. You could make this entire piece your mantra.
Once upon a time, the Devil was an Angel whose only desire was to be God...so much so, he blind-sided a legion of Angels, deceived them, and took them down, deep into the pits of Hell with him, for an Eternity.
And life moved on.
Brava.

[Jessica Lima]

Thank You so much for your review. We are always looking for the easy way out. If angels can fall imagine us? I've always thought that surrounded by other believers I couldn't possibly fall. But if angels did... I try to keep this as my mantra but its hard to remember the words when everything is against you.

[Stacy Purvis]

You are wise beyond your years.

[Mr.Writer]

Do you know that your outstanding poem can make such a big difference in todays society?
Not only is it engaging, it's also thought provoking and raises questions to improve understanding! It's a lesson, but an easy one to understand, not like a professors lecture...
An amazing piece!
Keep it up

[Jessica Lima]

Mr. Writer, you never disappoint. I am very glad you liked yet another piece. Who knows, maybe someday i'll be able to share my thoughts with the world. I like to make people happy and give them hope.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Jessica :))