Drink

Because of us

I blew the dust from my fingers

after sliding my hand across the counter

to erase the empty space

where the bottle use to be

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

The best about short poems or stories is that they may have many interpretation, and each person that reads it may have a different and unique perspective.
I found this poem intriguing, it seems the main character used to celebrate with a person that is no longer there, nice...

[Dminor6]

Always like hearing someone's take and perspective on my work. Most times it brings to light somethings I didn't notice, realize, or even intend. Thanks...

[Bob Sherunkle]

I like this.My kind of writing.

[Dminor6]

I appreciate the thought. Thanks...