The pain of my life

   The pain goes through my body till I cry

 Why is it that I'm so wrong

      The constant lectures are so annoying

 Sometimes I just wish I would die

 I'm sick of hearing that I'm a Nuisance

    Music only makes my soul darker

Stories helped for awhile, but make me sad

   My life just seems to be getting more translucent

It's always something with me

   Either I'm too loud, or forgetful

 But it only makes things worse to talk back

But one of these days they'll see

 

Author's Note

Another bad day :'(

Reviews

[Trenton Colburn]

This is so relatable, it is how i feel all the time when i am feel forced to plaster a smile on my face. all of your writing is utterly amazing but this piece put words to these emotions that are hard to describe accurately. saying you don't feel good enough doesn't cover it, but at least you can let your readers know and at the very least sympathize. i really enjoyed this poem!

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) I'm so glad you liked it. It just feel so good to get all of it out you know.

[just Penny]

I can identify with what's being said. The negative messages cut deep as others judge without considering how it feels to hear such stuff :( Hard to keep the self belief. The way you describe it is a true credit to your talent as a writer. Impressive :) Penny

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) That is exactly what I was trying to put across, you tell them and tell them and tell them but no one listens.

[Tatiana Casali]

Oh wow, I'm impressed. I really enjoyed this. Keep it up Love :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I thought you would be :) you told me to write my feelings :) here they are

[Tatiana Casali]

keep at it. I love it.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

:) I'm glad ^*^

[daemok]

"But one of these days they'll see"
I like that, pumps me up for all sorts of things.
Vengeance the number one factor.
Hope the night is better than the day.
Drift on friend.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :) Im glad you like it