The House of fear

My encounters at an abandoned house in the country, I'll never forget the fear I had in that house.

 

  I walk down the hall to an old looking door

And turn the Skeleton-Key quickly to the right

  The door creaks open, revealing the bright color of the sweet moon light

 This wasn't part of the tour

I step inside and flop on the bed, knowing something will happen

  Superstitious they all call me, with the tone of a laugh

 But I bet there's more people out there like me on the graph

   This isn't the normal haunted house someone would picture, with thunder clapping

 Many people died in this room, breathing their final breath

   I see a shadow rush by me in a flash

 Then hear the Chandelier fall with a crash

   Oh the magnificent things caused by death

  I see couples dancing lovingly in the moon light

They are suddenly set a'blaze by torches of pain

   Witches they called them, the creatures of hell were slain

My heart reached out to them, seeing their looks of fright

 Next is a mother and child laying in a room of red

   The child no older than two, reached out with a cry

About this time the moon was above the stars oh so high

  I looked to the mother and child, and they were dead

 A man yelled from the hall

   He had red eyes and grinned an evil grin

He asked me where I had been

  An Axe flew beside my head, and crashed with a fall

I ran from the house hearing screams of pain and fear

  The trees rushed by my head in a flash

I trip and fall with a crash

   The last thing I remember is hearing a woman saying "We would love to have you dear"

  

  

Author's Note

This is all true, I know it sounds sooooo fake, but it's not. I'm actually thinking about going back there with some friends, not to vandalize, but to see if anything happens.

Reviews

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

It sounds like an exciting haunted house! Wonder what mystery lurks behind all those events...

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I was thinking the same thing, and you know, oddly all the newspaper articles that mention the house are blacked out 0.0 it's just like something you'd see in a horror movie. It's like the town is trying to cover it all up

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

This piqued my interest. Where is this house located?

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

It's in the back woods of our house, if someone wanted to research it I bet they wouldn't be able to find it :/ it's like it dissappeard right of the map

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

Ah, it is just like the mystery of our missing airplane. It disappeared without a trace last month, and no one could find it until today. It was the largest multinational search and rescue effort in history.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I heard about that, it's so crazy. The world is just crazy anymore :(

[Mirajane]

I'm actually pretty disturbed,,, in a good way though. I believe your story ghost are real!!! But i enjoyed reading it very much

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I tried to make it feel as real as possible :) thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it :)

[Mirajane]

Well you succeeded, I had chills on my arms but you welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I really enjoyed this in a creepy sort of way.You penned it really well :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you very much :) I'm so glad you liked it

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.I really did :)

[Kiara]

Why would you go back??? I'd be terrified! And I really like it, it's written very well and it's just an interesting topic to me in general :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Than you so so much :) I want to go back because it was an interesting time, I mean, I was so scared I almost passed out, but I made it out of there alive to tell the tale, I want to see if i can again ^*^

[Kiara]

And if you don't..?

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

I will, trust me, I will

[Kiara]

Okaaayyyy.....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This sounds so creepy, but I really like this piece. It's amazing. :-)

Kaze~ :-)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much :D it was freaky, but amazing at the same time

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, I would be freaking out if I went into that house. Lol! :-)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

lol :) I'm so glad you liked it ^*^

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Lol! It was my pleasure reading your poem. :-)

[Bluefire]

It sounds like a nightmare to me. I like the way you rhymed it, the ends fit with each other and so did the middle. It was like a chaotic walk through a haunted house near Halloween.
Well played. ^^

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thank you so much ^*^ I'm so glad you liked it

[Bluefire]

x3 You're welcome

[Shawna]

I really liked this, actually. I'm very critical of other people's work, so for me, that's saying something. And I believe you when you say it's true, because I've had supernatural experiences of my own. At my own house. And no one believes me. :D

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

The supernatural can work in many ways, something in that house is not right. I just had the feeling of heartbreak and pain the whole time I was there. It's so sad that such a beautiful house can hold something so evil, so dark. But anyways I'm so glad you liked it :)