Loneliness
A Poem by DogDrawler
You know it You feel it You want to end it
It's unescapeable It's practically a war It's called loneliness...
Your "soul mate" has left you Has disrrupted your peace Now you are lost ...lonely...
You know you want to scream But it doesn't help You know you want to cry But what's that gonna' do?
Don't worry Eventually everybody will feel the power of ...loneliness... Don't let it stop you, though. Otherwise, trust me, it ain't gonna' do nothin' good
© 2013 DogDrawler
Author's Note
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This poem was made by the sadness I endured.
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An amazing piece that all kinds of people can easily connect to one way or another. (Meaning excellent expression of emotions.) Great work!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Scream if you must, let it out
Don't stop your tears, let it flow, let it go...
release every pain, every lonesomeness...
the power of moving on is never stop walking your life...
eventually the pain will heal, time has the power to be your friend
that you'll know something or someone is just right, just enough, to makes us whole again
somewhere in the hands of time...
for every broken piece of our heart makes us stronger in time...
your strong, this poem brings a expressive emotions in good way of release...
I liked it! Keep it up!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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*hugs* I so agree with the last stanza. Don't let the sadness consume you. In the wise words of Robert Frost "In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on."
It's good for you to write and I really like how you displayed your emotions through a well-written, straightforward poem that still leaves room for relate-ability. :)
100/100
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you. There's probably gonna be three or more poems until I stop crying so don't be surprised i.. read moreThank you. There's probably gonna be three or more poems until I stop crying so don't be surprised if you see more poems like this. *crying* sorry. It's so sad! *crying*
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12 Years Ago
*hugs tightly* It's gonna be ok, I promise!
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12 Years Ago
I hope so. I don't know what Megara was thinking. Why did she do this to me?! *crying* First break u.. read moreI hope so. I don't know what Megara was thinking. Why did she do this to me?! *crying* First break ups are hard.
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12 Years Ago
She's on WC, isn't she?
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12 Years Ago
Yes. That's where we met and fell in love. *sobbing* I still keep archives of messages of times we u.. read moreYes. That's where we met and fell in love. *sobbing* I still keep archives of messages of times we used to talk to each other.
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12 Years Ago
*Hugs* Have you ever met in real life?
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12 Years Ago
No. But we would always make up stories of us meeting. We really hoped we would, though.
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12 Years Ago
:/ I'm sorry... No matter if you met in real life or not break ups are hard. I can totally see your .. read more:/ I'm sorry... No matter if you met in real life or not break ups are hard. I can totally see your pain in this poem.
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. What's awfully unbearable is that my "Someone you love" poem is the complete opposite of this.. read moreYeah. What's awfully unbearable is that my "Someone you love" poem is the complete opposite of this. That's when I celebrated our third month anniversary. Can you check that out?
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12 Years Ago
Sure, I'd be happy to :)
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12 Years Ago
Thank you. I think I feel a little better now.
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12 Years Ago
Do you think I'll ever find another?
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12 Years Ago
Honestly, yes. As cheesy as it sounds, there are plenty of other fish in the sea :) They say that if.. read moreHonestly, yes. As cheesy as it sounds, there are plenty of other fish in the sea :) They say that if you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you, it's yours forever. If not, then it was never meant to be.
There's a lot of weight in those words and an incredible meaning behind them. So yeah. You'll find another. Most definitely. :)
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12 Years Ago
Thank you. There is one girl on WC I've had a crush on for a while. A old friend named "The Grey Wo.. read moreThank you. There is one girl on WC I've had a crush on for a while. A old friend named "The Grey Wolf". Do you think she might be it?
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12 Years Ago
I know her quite well, actually. And you'll never know if you don't try. I say go for it! :)
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12 Years Ago
Okay! I will! Slowly and smoothly. Wish me luck! Goodnight for now! (Don't tell her I had a crush on.. read moreOkay! I will! Slowly and smoothly. Wish me luck! Goodnight for now! (Don't tell her I had a crush on her. ;)
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12 Years Ago
Lol your secrets safe with me. Though she probably saw this in the news feed XD
Night! .. read moreLol your secrets safe with me. Though she probably saw this in the news feed XD
Night! :)
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12 Years Ago
Oh, crap! I hope she didn't see that!
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12 Years Ago
It'll be fine ^^
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12 Years Ago
Let's hope so. I'd be blushing like crazy.
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12 Years Ago
Hehe that's kinda funny to think about XD
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12 Years Ago
Maybe... So at this minute I'm talking to her. We're having a decent conversation. I'm taking this s.. read moreMaybe... So at this minute I'm talking to her. We're having a decent conversation. I'm taking this slow; building the likeness of each other.
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12 Years Ago
Good idea ^^
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12 Years Ago
Wow! That was easy. I just asked her out and she agreed!
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12 Years Ago
Good for you! I'm glad things worked out! :)
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. And uhh... I told her that I had a crush on her. I didn't blush like crazy but SHE did. Then I.. read moreYeah. And uhh... I told her that I had a crush on her. I didn't blush like crazy but SHE did. Then I told her a true compliment about what I liked about her. After that, I guess you could say she liked me too.
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12 Years Ago
That's awesome. Keep me posted! ^^
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12 Years Ago
I foretell that you're enjoying the gossip between me and your best friend. :)
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12 Years Ago
XD Good guess
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12 Years Ago
I also bet you both will be talking about me when you both message each other. 'Cause it's happened .. read moreI also bet you both will be talking about me when you both message each other. 'Cause it's happened before with Megara.
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12 Years Ago
Well, she hasn't brought it up yet .-.
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12 Years Ago
Wait. So you both ARE talking?
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. We talk almost everyday.
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12 Years Ago
Wow. So do we. Hmm... What if we all three talk?
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12 Years Ago
How would that work? .-.
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12 Years Ago
I've done it before. It can be any place besides messaging. She could comment right now and we could.. read moreI've done it before. It can be any place besides messaging. She could comment right now and we could respond. Though I don't want it here.
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12 Years Ago
I've done that before.
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12 Years Ago
See... All we have to do is pick a place to talk at.
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12 Years Ago
Djekeio. What?
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12 Years Ago
Idk. XD So where are we gonna do this?
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12 Years Ago
How 'bout at my group Wolfpack Poetry?
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12 Years Ago
Ok! I didn't know you had a group. :)
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12 Years Ago
Yeah, just go the forum post called: Triple Conversation 1
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you had a soul mate?
all my favorite people are imaginary friends in my stories
no wonders writers kill themselves.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Of course I "did" . My girlfriend on the website just dumped me. I basically used my sadness and ma.. read moreOf course I "did" . My girlfriend on the website just dumped me. I basically used my sadness and made a poem out of it.
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Added on August 28, 2013
Last Updated on August 28, 2013
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DogDrawlerHutto, TX
About
Hello, friend. :)
My favorite kind of writing are: animals, sci fi, romance, adventure, fiction, and action.
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Kathryn Lasky
Erin Hunter
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