Shhhhhhhhh

I lay alone with only my

Thoughts

To keep me company

And the one word i cannot be

Rid of

Echoes inside my brain

Bouncing off the

Walls 

Of this empty room

Making me

Shudder

At the very thought

Don't say the word

Or I might

Cry

Because now It's for real

He's going to

Die

Reviews

[Pax]

a twisted ending..i like it.

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks

[nigrum homonculus]

ah man this hit so close to home...that ending did it for me. well done. this was written so well!

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you, and, it IS a very personal write for me as well. I just had to let my feelings out or my head might've exploded. Having to deal with some emotional stuff and writing's helped a lot

[nigrum homonculus]

damn. i respect you a lot for sharing it the way that you did. ah i know that feeling man. inner feelings start to show outwardly and that. if you ever need someone to talk to, i'm here man. hope things get better for you annabelle

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks me too

[afra]

i love the twist in the end ....great write

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow! Twist on the ending makes the piece ominous. Good rhyme

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you fo your review