Venus sails the river

A fantastic day

 

 

Golden grain

After moments of folly and pain

I feel much better,

I am what i am, i can not change.

I sat in a valley of golden grain.

Venus sailed the river,

I looked at the stars from a bench.

And since that day

I am still looking

because the sky is soo deep and immense.

Day after day

I will keep on searching,

One more day makes difference.

 

I don't know how the story begun

But i hope it will never end

because i feel out of this world

and i hope it will never end.

 

I remembered crowns of golden grain.

Brown strong roots.

I stood on my own feet.

I didn't feel any strain.

I put on my best boots,

and walked down the street.

The lovers from the window

kissed and said goodbye.

I danced with my own shadow,

I never felt so high.

Tears washes off the sorrow.

It's of joy, if i cry.

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

This is such a beautiful poem about finding self ( if I got it right lolz :P )
I particulary liked the image with the shadow ---> very nice and original.

A.M.

[Gandré]

This was beautiful ending. This searching is looking into the depth of our inner self. I liked how you wrote it with ease. I voted for you. regards, Gandre. (I will appreciate if you have a look what I write).