Riddle C

Please, give me your opinions about it and try to guess the answer :)

My colours can be found all over the world,

you all know me for them,

Green, Yellow, Blue and all their friends belong to me.

After an angry storm, people look at the sky waiting for me,

because i am the message of peace it sends to them,

but just for a few hours, my lord allows me to be in this world.

I'm a bridge made by no stone, touched by no human hand,

just a shy inverted smile, linking earth with the sky,

in an everlasting friendship, no soul will ever break.

This is me, and that is the riddle you decided to take,

so tell me the answer, tell me who i am, don't be shy !

Just don't hope for any clues, i won't give you a hand.

Author's Note

Ok, that particular poem is strange for me: I don't like it, no matter how many changes i've done on it, i still don't like it ... but i don't dislike it enough to delete it (i usually delete the 45%, more or less, of my poems) so i wait for your judgments, be honest, please !!
Tried to "create" my personal rhyme scheme (hoping it doesn't exist yet xD): ABC CBA DEF FED
The answer is ... Rainbow.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh this is a rainbow :) I hope you know this wonderful as it is. I'm actually glad that you saved this one. Since it's really beautiful and described really well. Frankly, you do such a marvelous job riddles anyways. Keep up the good work.
Outstanding!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A crafted carcaphony of colours!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love how you wrote about the rainbow in a riddle, beautiful. Love the descriptions placed for the the riddle. As for your author's note, I dislike that you delete your writes, you should keep them. And this one included, even if you dislike them, someone will enjoy and love 'em, do not waste them. As for the rhyme scheme, nice that you have fun doing those. How can you not like this poem though? It's beautiful.

[To be scene To be heard..]

this is sooo a Rainbow!!!!!!!!!

[emman]

RAINBOW :))))

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the description. Some beauty is for the lucky to see. Thank you for your interesting thoughts and riddle. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[CourtneyShay]

oh is it a rainbow and i love it

[Aly Jones]

It's a rainbow. There's no question in my mind that says otherwise.

[devon]

Is it a rainbow?

And I don't see anything wrong with this poem, other than the fact that the last stanza isn't really needed.

:)

[AK]

Rainbow! Haha, nice poem though. Really good but I admit I liked riddle B a tad bit more. Keep writing!