Riddle H

Opinions and answers are welcome :)

I'm no bigger than your fist,

I fly from side to side with no direction,

my insane journey is not my intention,

they hit me, and force me, and i can't do otherwise,

every drop of sweat makes my hopes of stopping arise

but my cruel enemies won't give me up that easily,

with their scaring weapons they will hit me badly,

because of them i cry in sorrow,

they make me afraid of not coming to tomorrow,

my pain, hiding with savage roars they try,

not a single tear i see in their eye,

such an endless time i spend in that net-split field

untill the final score is revealed,

'till the next game i'm free to rest,

guess my name and pass my test !

Author's Note

Hope you liked it !
Used Chaucer rhyme scheme (ABBCCDD etc ...),
The answer is ... Tennis ball.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

My guess was sport. Good riddle. I can see the answer now in this riddle. lol

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

For some reason I thought the answer was heart! x

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description in the poem. I believe a tennis ball. Side to side. Could be a soccer ball? Thank you for sharing your entertaining poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[To be scene To be heard..]

its a type of ball baseball, softball, or volleyball?

[Who Cares]

Wow, a very interesting perspective on the way a tennis ball may feel. Nice personification. I was originatly baseball until you said a net-split feild. You stuck to a rhyme scheme as well adding flair to the riddle. Nice job

[Leslie Philibert]

Another good, funny poem from Dominic. May I just suggest one small change - breezily might be the better rhyme in line 7.Good one !

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

This is great! A very good challenge. Very original. Well done. :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

In my mind I was guessing volleyball :) Ahaha. A great riddle though!!





Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[TL Boehm]

nicely done. perhaps it is a volleyball?

[Kaya]

I'm guessing sport???? I don't do sport... this ones hard.