Seasons

Happiness and how long it will last

Seasons

 

Fall brought shock and misunderstanding

Winter brought misery and cheating

Spring brought hope for things to work out in my favor

Summer brought…still haven’t figured it out yet

But it’s lookin’ like happiness in the making

Author's Note

Honest comments, please and thank you.

Reviews

[Nightfall]

I think you got it what yu wanted to get...i loved your this writing...

season comes every-year without any reason,
everyone comes, everyone goes from these world's tension,
it's alike a recession, i liked you this writing decision......
liked you this writing decision, why don't ya write more here with your nice imagination,
i don't know what's your nation, but you're reaching out...& i think you love too spring + winter seasons.......
anyway...loved your this writing season...

[Dominique Lambright]

Thanks a lot :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Spring is always a good time. Re-birth of hope and energy. Summer can lead us to new places and chance. Thank you for the excellent poem for the seasons.
Coyote

[Dominique Lambright]

Thank you for your comment :)

[Sirius King]

I really like this, its simple, but it tells a story...how our situations and relationships can change just like the seasons...Good Work!

[Dominique Lambright]

Thanks :)

[Sirius King]

yw :-)

[Phantom Heart]

It ends up being cute. I like that it ends with the potential of happiness. Now I wonder, who brought on the misery and cheating...
Thanks for sharing!

[Dominique Lambright]

Lol thanks. Fall was when my boyfriend broke up with me in high school, winter he hooked up with one of my friends but he cheated on her with me (bad decision on my part to participate but hey you live and you learn), spring i thought he was finally going to be done with her and be with me (how dumb), summer i moved on and had a fling with another guy and I enjoyed myself to the fullest haha