Promise

Just love in the air

Promise

 

Promise me…

That when things get tough

We don’t give up

Even if we get a little rough

 

Promise me…

That you won’t lie

Not even on the fly

Especially not to get a piece of the pie

 

Promise me…

That you will always hold me tight

All through the night

And I’ll do the same with all my might

 

Promise me…

That when we make love

You only fit to me like a glove

So don’t stray or you lose my love

 

Promise me…

We continue to work on us

We continue to grow as one

Yet separate beings with identity

 

Promise me…

That you will cherish every moment we spend

One day I will have your name and never end

You’ll be shameless of our relationship, no one can offend

Author's Note

Honest comments, please and thank you.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not too much to promise...we hope for commitment through thick and thin...not just a short good time.

[cloud]

This is so honestly written. I can feel your thoughts through the page and appreciate them all. This is good writing from you.

[Dominique Lambright]

Thank you. Really appreciate the comments. ^_^

[Junert]

They do make the promise, keeping it is the problem. An emotional poem speaking almost everyone who is in love's mind. Great one.

[Dominique Lambright]

Thank you. Ya I was just thinking about my relationship coming to a year in a month and I don't want it to end because I'd be lost without him ^_^

[Dominique Lambright]

Ya I was just thinking about my relationship coming to a year in about a month and how I just don't want it to ever end. If it did I'd be lost without him ^_^, he is that good to me and I wouldn't do anything to jeopardize us.

[Junert]

Lucky you.