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like i said I don't like to titling my poems. I have lost the will to it , a long time ago.

I don't miss you.
I haven't time for that.

I find you
in the warm breeze of summer.
in the depth blue ocean
on children's eyes
even in my smile.

you are in my prayers while I meditate.
on my thoughts , even the little sad ones.
ohh, not to mention 
the sweet wild dreams.

Yet.you are everything and nothing to me.


darling you are confusing
my love for attachment.

Reviews

[ancoraimparo]

What a beautiful take on the way love changes and the journey to overcoming it. "I don't miss you. I haven't time for that." Great way to open, I was with you from the beginning.

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart touching. Simply beautiful. I really liked this.

[Donicca Dona L]

thank you for taking you time and reading it I really appreciate :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome. It was my pleasure :)

[Rassoul]

Yet.you are everything and nothing to me.

You've such an amazing way in writing and you choose your words very well, but just one thing, I guess you need to name your poems.

Nice job, Donicca.

[Donicca Dona L]

Thank you for you time for stopping by and reviewing :)
I guess I need to but I don't when I am ready to title them again, its been years I don't do that :)

[Adam Adams]

Same here. Me either seemed to have lost my will esp. the passion to write poetry, anymore. I don't know why, but may be, it's true, winds never blow in the same direction neither come across in the same phase of coldness. It changes along season so does passion along with time. A very honest poetry you come to drip down in words.

I'll make sure to subscribe to your writings, and keep surfing through your work time-to-time.

Looking forward to reading your stuffs!

[Donicca Dona L]

currently I am trying myself in a story, but I think I am not ready to leave poetry yet! Everything comes with time and the way we feel about it. I will check for sure your work :) Thank you for stopping and for your review :)