42.

Honey,can't you see how lost I am?
trying not to tremble when I speak
It's you that my heart wants.

What should I do?
I am trapped between
if it meant to be it will, (destiny or fate) and
if you want something you have to fight for it. (you write your own destiny).

Tell me it darling,
can it be more or are you just being polite?

Reviews

[keith]

unrequited love, a pang of the heart often leaves the holder insecure of their place in the heart of another and you have conveyed this very well.

'how lost' ... 'tremble' ... 'trapped'
powerful and precise expression of the empty often caused by want of another.

the last line is spot on ...
'can it be more or are you just being polite?'

vividly honest, revealing, sincere, vulnerable ... half of love, half of love.
well done.

[Donicca Dona L]

I don't even know if I know how to reply in this. well maybe and honest and huge '' Thank You'' not only for taking your time and reading my poems but also a Thank You for your words. Reviews like this, made my day a little brighter.

[keith]

great offerings require correct honest comment.

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, strong and needed word written.
"Honey,can't you see how lost I am?
trying not to tremble when I speak
It's you that my heart wants. "
I liked the above lines. Honest and direct. We must be sometime. Thank you Donicca for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

I totally agree with Mr.Alexxander down there..
You'll be.. what you are

[Donicca Dona L]

I will try the best to be who I am.... :)

[Alexxander vaan Don Nie..]

you'll be, what you are...... a solitary woman. :D

[Donicca Dona L]

Thank you for your review ;)