The Wind Has Gone

This is a poem I wrote when I was in elementary school. It just kinda always stuck with me.

Gone with the wind

as the wind has gone

sharp shallow night has come

birds have disappeared in the mist of wind

the sun has gallopped out of sight

and the moon comes to seek destiny

as we seek night

Reviews

[vanishing]

I could not quote a favorite line
hauntingly ethereal depiction
of the night-birds-winds-mist
sun-moon- This writing is full spectrum

Gone with the wind
as the wind has gone
sharp shallow night has come
birds have disappeared in the mist of wind
the sun has gallopped out of sight
and the moon comes to seek destiny
as we seek night

[emmajoy]

Few words, big meaning .. 'sharp shallow night has come' - 'and the moon comes to seek destiny -two beautiful phrases.

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I can see why it has. Short but full of meaning. I especially like " as the moon comes to seek destiny...". Thank you for sharing