A Better World

I write what is on my mind.

Why do we fight
Why do we hate
Why do we discriminate
I think we should all get along
And admit we are wrong
That would make us strong
Then we could work together
To make this world better
We are all the same inside
We are all on the same Ride
Let's put our differences aside

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

don't we all feel the same ... unless we are criminal :( your title and poem are well fit ...i am not a fan of your rhyming choices ... they seem too.......... easy .. maybe thats the word i'm searching for ;)
i'm not familiar with the form and rhyme scheme (i am not familiar with a lot for sure) is it one you followed or did it just come out that way?
being reminded of the state of this in our world and how simple the solution seems to those who can see the light of love when shared covers a multitude of sins as the Bible says .. i keep coming to the same conclusion myself...this world is not going to be rosey ..we are tested throughout life and can be little springs of that love when we choose courage, selfless loving behaviors and words ... alas! heavy sigh!
great theme that can never be said enough ... inspires me to prayer actually .. and we aren't alone in our desire for peace on earth are we?! ;)
E.

[Ghost]

Only if we could, but everyone wants to make issues out of even the smallest things.. I try to treat people nice and the way I would hope they would for me... But someone usually makes a mess sometime or another.

[Donna]

I know what you mean and its to bad. All we can do is treat people how you would want to be treated. Thank you for the review.

[Serendipity Planet]

Amen :)
Good work, thank you