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Am I alive or dead
What the hell is going on in my head
Why don't I know if this is real or a dream
I can't help but scream

Reviews

[Ghost]

Sometimes even good people get stuck inside their head and it can be a scary place... I like the way you expressed it thank for sharing

[Donna]

Thank you so much!

[W R Stowe]

How about Void Thoughts for a title? Our mind can often lead us to an abyss and we feel lost with no sense of reality very relatable W. R. Stowe

[Donna]

Yes, I like that!

[sette]

the mystery of life anybody can relate with. good piece of writing.

[Donna]

I appreciate that! ☺

[repituugjng]

I believe this is something anybody can identify with at some point in their life. Loved it.

[Donna]

Thank you! I appreciate the review!

[fireangelpoet]

So relatable, especially lately! Well done!

[Donna]

Thank you very much!☺

[fireangelpoet]

You're welcome!

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Scream can always help to clear up your mind. Very nice funny rhyming.

[Donna]

I appreciate that. Thank you so much!☺