CRUISE

CRUISE

If I had a lot of money
I would wait for it to be sunny
then I would go get my honey

We would go on a cruise
to anywhere we choose
we can even play horseshoes

Let's dance all night
under the moonlight
oh what a delight

Just you & me
how nice that would be
out in the middle of the sea

We can have some wine
while we dine
that would be fine

There's is just one thing..
I don't have a lot of money
It's not sunny
and I don't have a honey!

It's not funny!

Reviews

[Lyrically Inclined]

I think you should go on a cruise by yourself and find you a new honey!

[Donna]

I love that! Thank you!

[Jon Roggie]

Still,
under the moonlight,
while dodging the recent rain.
Play some horseshoes,
and have a touch of fun.

[Donna]

Nice! Thank you!

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

I can relate to this too well... some of us may not have a honey or money but your words took us to those places none the less. Very well written. Love the lighthearted touch on a subject that could be saddening

[Donna]

I appreciate that so much!

[Glen's not so clean slate]

I’m glad. You’re always welcome, Donna.

[Neville]

Hey Donna, that's too bad but if you stick around, that will surely change...Nice write....N

[Donna]

Your sweet! Thank you! 😉

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely.....N

[¿]

The rhyming, starting and the conclusion is fascinating! When you start thinking something you go deep in it but suddenly back to sense and find it was nothing but your impossible imagination.
Greatly written Donna.😊

[Donna]

Thank you so much for the review! It means so much to me.