My Baby Boy

Just a little something I wrote about my son.

It seems like yesterday
I was holding you.
My newborn baby boy in blue.
You are a dream come true.

Now your grown
with two boys of your own
I'm so glad
that you are a wonderful Dad

Enjoy your boys
while there young
because one day
they will have boys of their own!

Reviews

[Les]

I like the continuity in this piece about how parental love passes down and across the generations. A lovely sentiment and nicely done Donna.

[Donna]

Thank you Les!

[Les]

The piece I wrote called "parting" reflects my relationship with my son. If you had a spare 5 minutes and wished to view it, you'd be very welcome. But entirely optional of course. :0)

[sette]

so sweet of a mother telling through a poem the love for a son.. there is nothing really more valuable in this world than being a mother.

[Donna]

Thank you so much!

[sette]

you are very much welcome

[John the Baptist]

Very pleasant and insightful. Still, spell check the next to last word.

[Donna]

Thank you for the review and spell check!

[John the Baptist]

Actually, it should be "their."

[Donna]

Are you serious? Lol

[Donna]

Boy I screwed that up. I appreciate that!