Your Beautiful

You are so beautiful
inside & out
without a doubt

Your eyes are so dark
with a little spark

Your so loving & kind
I love your behind

I see how much you care
and that's so rare

I just want to let you know how I feel
and that's for real.

Reviews

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

Thanks Donna, I’m flattered that ye saw me new profile pic... and yes I have been working out of late. More squats than I can count frankly

[Dinesh Kumar]

Great rhyme really enjoyed.

[Donna]

Thank you Dinesh!

[Dinesh Kumar]

Mention not

[Les]

In the middle of this poem, It's clever the way you've coupled something emotional with something more earthy ........ "Your so loving & kind, I love your behind" I guess that's what relationships are a combination of the spiritual and physical. You end on a nice note too with an expression of feelings for the person. Nice work.

[Donna]

Thank you my friend

[Ghost]

A nice romantic write to the one you love... Thank you for sharing

[Donna]

Thank you for the nice review!

[sette]

so romantic donna, it captured the loving emotion

[Donna]

In glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

[sette]

you are welcome