My lover from Autumn (fragmented piece)

A fragmented piece from "I've loved the girl with auburn hair", an old work of mine. If you would like to check the full work, please refer to my profile or search for it using the given name

Her auburn hair smells like pine,

In her wholesome gaze, my autumn lies,

Her beauty is as plentiful as a harvest,

I, her lover, am farmers’ most jealous.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think of autumn in Vermont, the beautiful maples and that New England countryside.
And I think of a past love...the first thing to which I was attracted...her auburn hair.
j.

[Stu. T.H.]

Autumn maples are truly a scenic beauty, and the way you fascinate yourself with old memories does make me wanna immerse myself in the beauty of autumn from another land as well.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, author jacob.