Absent-minded on a beach

Absent-minded on a beach

A Poem by Stu. T.H.
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Out of a whim.

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Absent-minded, on a sunny day, I walk without shoes,
The sea rages slowly, tides turn, missing hues,
The wet trail you left behind has grown steep and dry,
Words followed, without shades, as the wind waved goodbye. 

- Dan Rastley / Stu. T.H. (January 23, 2024)

© 2024 Stu. T.H.


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i like the abstract beauty of and in this one!
the contrast between your words in each line ~ pulling back and forth ~
my favorite is the last line:
"Words followed, without shades, as the wind waved goodbye."
{absolutely whimsical. wishing. wanting. hope.}

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stu. T.H.

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind visit, author living lavender, I wish you a nice day.



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i like the abstract beauty of and in this one!
the contrast between your words in each line ~ pulling back and forth ~
my favorite is the last line:
"Words followed, without shades, as the wind waved goodbye."
{absolutely whimsical. wishing. wanting. hope.}

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stu. T.H.

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind visit, author living lavender, I wish you a nice day.

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 Added on January 24, 2024
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