A world beyond the gloomy rains

A short song I wrote.

Waiting for the rain to turn off,
Waiting for the sky to close,
Though the sentiments aren't unheard of,
The weather still turn cold,

Whatever it does- it takes from me a piece,
Nothing to gain- I have none to please,
My desires have long burned to crisp,
-- And my nights grew old...

/ / / / / /

Yet,
You stepped into this world of mine,
This palace of gloom barefoot,
Telling me what life is like,
And finally I understood --

...

That--
The world itself -is a busy place -!
No time to waste, leaving things to fate!
Though I wonder now is it still too late?
-- For me to go... with you.

/ / / / / /

(!!)
The world itself- is a busy place -!
But I only care about you making it out okay -!
Saving me from my eternal fall from grace-!
And from there we go--- Tonight!

- Leon / Stu. T.H. (February 10, 2024)

Author's Note

Instruments designed for: Guitar.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a rescue to it. While the world was seen as a gloomy, hopeless place, the appearance of the addressee seems to have changed all of that. The last verse is filled with hope. May it be so.

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your kind visit, author John the Baptist. Happy Valentine's day!