Couplet: Our feather(s)

Short 2-line.

A faltering feather touches the ground,
A flock of dozen more overtakes the sky.

- Leon / Stu. T.H. (May 11, 2024)

Reviews

[mou]

There was a time when I spoke to feathers. I loved them. A feather's fall has different meanings. Whenever any good or not so good happens, it is usually followed by a single fall. I love the multidimensional denotation that you painted with the beauty of brevity, Leon
- mou

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your read, author mou, I'm glad you found your own meanings in the poem. May your fortunes be everlasting, just like the feathers in the sky.

[mou]

I heard wishes made on feathers make their first shower on the kind heart who has made it. I too believed feather as its power is strong. Thank you dear Leon. You're so kind and beautiful