Blue Mondays

Blue Monday, ever the fright;

damp soggy shoes, dull eminent light.

 

Blue Monday, sinks deep into me,

drags through the gutter, never any fee.

 

Blue Monday, raise up a smile?

Wanting a Friday, so f**k off a while.

 

Blue Monday, battered and bruised,

even the flag run ragged, unfit to be used.

 

Blue Monday, try to drown you in wine.

Whatever I do, it's your day to shine!

Author's Note

Watching the world go by on a dull Monday afternoon.

Reviews

[#Gatsby's Bouncer]

Could be a song! I like it.

[Lonesome Traveler]

Thank you :) Well it was slightly inspired by the song Blue Monday by Cat Stevens.

[Dalia]

I know how you feel my friend, I feel the same for Mondays, liked the imagery in your poem, go on :)

[not one]

wonderful write

[Sami Khalil]

Blue Monday, sinks deep into me,

drags through the gutter, never any fee.


My faves in this nice poem...:0

[Lonesome Traveler]

Thank you for taking the time to come and have a look :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Holly Mason]

nice write thank you

[Lonesome Traveler]

Thank you!

[Devanshu Rajput]

great write...wonderful read...lovely piece.keep writing

[Lonesome Traveler]

Thank you :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

your welcome