Hungry!

Spur of the moment. This is what happens when I'm hungry.

Almost time for lunch--I'm staring at the clock--

Hungry!

I'm trying to complete my algebra equation, what is 4 + 3--

Hungry!

Tick, tock, goes the clock,

Hungry!

I have to finish this one problem,

this one agonizing question,

before it's--

Hungry!

Time for--

Hungry!

Lunch.

Author's Note

This is completely free verse. It doesn't all rhyme, and I've decided to play with some wording and see what effect it has on readers. I wrote this for the sole pupose of avoiding work, a few minutes before lunch. XD Rate please? :3

Reviews

[Archia]

This was a nice humurous poem. I guess you must've been hungry at the time.

[Jasmine Thousand]

Hehe! I was totally thinking, Hey! This sounds just like me! (Were you reading our minds? O.o)
It's such a cute little poem. Just one little nit-picky note.
4+3 seems way to simple. Maybe something more like... x+y-z? LOL, yeah, I know, I'm SUCH a nitpicker!!!

~Jasmine Thousand~

*100

[The XYZ Writer]

Omg! You just described the scenario I had everyday before lunchtime. Literally described it. How did you know!!!
Such a cute poem :) Made me laugh!

[Wren]

Hahaha!! Love this poem:) so funny and reflexs the exact way that i feel when i have maths before lunch!! Nice work:)

[Miss Evans]

Haha, this is cute. I feel like this a lot of the time. Poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be relateable. Bravo.

*95*

[Ami N.]

:D Gosh. I know, right. When you're hungry, it's like the word hungry shows up in everything. :) Sweet poem.

[Desiree B.]

Finally! There's someone out there that experiences the same problem that I do when I'm hungry: that it is absolutely impossible to focus. Your poem is very creative!

Nice work!