Uniform Nature

Mowing the lawn from two completely different perspectives. o3o

The bright skies

The shining sun

Tell lies

  Lies here are none.

 

The truth is here

Hidden at first

But it's severe

It is cursed.

 

A giant tearing machine

It roars and buckles and jeers

The man behind it has a heartless routine

Sounds of our screams he never hears.

 

Our unique curls are snatched

Our crawling friends die

Leaving us uniform and matched

And he doesn't utter a sigh.

 

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What a beautiful lawn

All the weeds are gone

Pests are out of the way

Such a bright day.

 

The lawn mower purrs to me

Making the grass neat and tidy

 Stocky short and cute

The lawn mower I scoot.

 

My wife in the bed will love this

This labor I do for her bliss

The kids in their rooms will be happy

They won't need to get busy.

 

Weeds are so ugly

Insects are crazy

The grass grows wild

Good thing I keep them mild.

Author's Note

I'm experimenting here. o3o I wanted to do the first half with one rhyme scheme, and then the last half a different one. This is how the first one goes:
a
b
a
b

While the second half goes:
a
a
b
b
I've noticed that the first rhyme-scheme style tends to be more deep and ominous, while the second rhyme scheme is somehow airy, light, and playful. :D

Review pweez? :3

Reviews

[I'm Just me:)]

i love it its smart and elegant and very creative i love it

[Liam]

A beautiful piece of art.

[The XYZ Writer]

I always love your poems cause they're so cute and funny, and have different ways of thinking. :) I love this experiment Sunny! Please make more soon!!!!

*99*

P.S- Great rhyme scheme.

[A. L. Allen]

Hahaha, I love this! The two different points of view are humorous when put together. :) I love your experimentation with the rhyme schemes. I think it turned out great!

Once again, another fantabulous write! :D

[AK]

Very nice, I liked it a lot..

[Summer'sBreeze]

LOL
Dragon this is fantastic!
I love the part from the grass's point of view XD
Love it great write!!
*100*

[Jasmine Thousand]

Wow I never noticed that about rhyme schemes, but it's true!!! I love it, absolutely amazing. LOL, the weeds part was funny!!! And I could almost imagine the sun, lawnmower.... I'm going to get a glass of lemonade. :)

You've done it again, Dragonling. Why have you never placed in a contest before?
Spectacular work.

**100*

[Starcaller]

lol! Somehwat funny in a completly sad way XD very interesting.