Illusions

Oh, sweet embrace
A kiss
A touch
Love!
No, just a glance.

Oh, lovely eyes
Those lips
Those hands
Passion!
No, just a dream.

Oh, promising hope
My future
My desire
A life!
No, just a lie.

Reviews

[Hatchling]

this is beautiful!! the passion is captured so beautifully and the emotion is well expressed here. Good Job

[Tsi]

Its gorgeous! The passion would've been lost if it were too long, and you captured the emotion wonderfully.

[NeverSurrender]

It's short, but still holds emotion. Very nicely done ^^. Love the repeating 'No, just a ...'

[Erin Lee]

i love this! i'd completely ditch the last stanza though. i think it holds up on its own without that last one. the last one makes it seem like you are editorializing it. the rest is amazing!