Captive of fear and oppression

Waiting in a hell

Fear a constant companion

When will he come again?

 

Author's Note

A short idea from a longer poem

Reviews

[Legion]

I like it. Dark and full of angst. Could also be taken two ways. Don't know if you were going for a haiku here or not, but if you were the last line has one too many syllables in it.

[Rhine Wolf]

hell love you almost nailed it but you missed it on the last line
"When will he come again?"

change it to "Will he come again?"

so when will we get the whole LONG poem?

Love you, Fallon

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

First off nice to see you writing again, been a long time... certainly a lot was said in such a short tome... if we let our fears take us over we are already dead and condemned. Like this a lot.