Nature Haiku

A poem for a school contest

Cherry blossoms bloom

Winds pick up their sweet petals

Natures Spring time snow

 

Author's Note

ignore grammer

Reviews

[Alia]

Couple of suggestions here.First line - "blossoms" needn't be capitalized.Second line - it should be "petals."Third line - apostrophe in "Nature's" and it would look better, I think, if you got rid of the capitalization here again and made it "spring time."Thanks for sharing.Alia

[* Mourning Starr *]

Very pretty Haiku, reminds me of the time I spent in Washington, DC while the cherry blossoms were in bloom...........

[P.J. Sebastianus]

All your poety is so serene and inspiring. I enjoy reading it and I hope you continue sharing your beautiful takelnts with the world. Also I would like to say that I agree whole-heartedly with your motto, I believe that the world should mind their own business.

[Poeticpiers]

Should the second line read sweet petals?
otherwise excellent