Four Seasons

A poem written for a contest at school

With the spring

Comes the cleansing rain

With the rain

Comes glorious rebirth

 

 

With the summer

Comes the scorching heat

With the heat

Comes the chance for change

 

 

With the fall

Comes the release of old life

With the release of old life

Comes the nutrition for to sustain

 

 

With the winter

Comes the silent sleep

With the silent sleep

Comes the chance to heal

 

 

With the passing seasons

Goes passing dreams

With coming seasons

Come fleeting hopes

 

 

With the old year

Go the problems we faced

With the New Year

Come obstacles to over come

 

 

When yesterday goes

Tomorrow comes

When tomorrow leaves

You still have today
 

Author's Note

ignore grammer

Reviews

[Anata]

Nice :) i like this poem.
Very well found to compare the seasons and holidays with feelings and emotions. It's orignial and well written.
When yesterday goes
Tomorrow comes
When tomorrow leaves
You still have today
That's such a positive thought, more people should look at life that way, it's too short to waste and to long not to enjoy.

[Pakino]

I like how you compared the seasons. I would have liked to see the peom extended a bit more though. Kinda ended out of no where :(. But overall not bad enjoyed it.

[Poeticpiers]

Simple and refreshing poetry and yet with a clear message contained therein
WE only have now live for today tomorrow may no come and yesterday we cannot change