A Never-Ending Sorrow

Holding on to the only thing left.

Everything ripped from my hands,

the pieces won't fit back together.

The emptiness is too much to bear,

The future is my only friend.

We all want a good life,

a good past present and future.

The places we travel,

the friends we all hold onto dearly.

Emptiness,

you were always by my side,

you are my only friend,

the only one in who I find comfort.

So when I need you most,

Come to my aid,

and this never-ending sorrow

 will fade and a new hope

will dawn.

Author's Note

A quick poem I whipped up.

Reviews

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Vary nice poem!
Keep up the great work!!

[Zac]

Thank you.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work... for just whipping it up you put in some quality work and a meaningful write. Good job :)

[Ilerah]

Good job, very well written and descriptive. Good job keep it up.

[Zac]

Thank you.

[Ilerah]

Glad to help out mate.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Wording is great and imagery as well,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Zac]

Thanks for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the logic of the poetry.
"Come to my aid,
and this never-ending sorrow
will fade and a new hope
will dawn."
We need support and concern. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Zac]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Riley Justine]

It's so pretty! It flows really well, also.
Awesome job with this one, Zac!

I would just capitalize the title

[Zac]

Thank you.