Morning

This morning's a morning
A morning of warning
Warning to those
Those of you I'm adorning
Adorning with sight
Of that which I'm performing
So make it a morning
Of heeding my warning
Of the day getting bright
And the temperature warming
And the path getting light
And the footsteps a forming
There's a train comin' through
Don't let it be harming
Harming your being
On this beautiful morning
I may come off to you
As handsome and charming
But what you will see
May just be alarming
If you stand in the path
On this morning of warning

Reviews

[Tricia O'Brien]

This is rad as hell. I read it a few times over.
You have a way with words for sure, simple yet powerfully descriptive...I dig

[Cerebriation]

It's meant to seem happy, and sort of devious. Sort of like, things are not what they seem. I'm all kind and cheery until you stand in my way. Or something like that. When I write, I usually just wing it and try not to do any editing, so that my immediate thoughts stay there in concrete.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Right on, I write the same way. Always have. I dig for sure =-]

[Cerebriation]

Just published another one. Check it out. It's called "Life of mine, oh, life of mine". I'll give some of your stuff a look.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Sweet, I'll take a look

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

the morning is a strange bird indeed to thisa night time hampster dam good to see ya posting again hell keep it up and stay crazy cheers Gonzo

[Brittany]

This made me chuckle. I read it like it was a fast moving train for some reason. It was comical and flowed really well. I especially liked when you used the last word as the first. I thought it might pattern that way all the way through. It didn't, but it still worked. Nice job.

[Cerebriation]

Thank you! Either I love your reviews or you love my writing. Either way, you are awesome!