Unordained Locality

Still one of my favorites after all these years! I wrote it when I was a sophomore in high school. It has much deep meaning, if you can come to find it! Read between the lines. AP

Broken
In a time of hope
Irony is awkward in this place of despair
Picture the world a beautiful sorrow
Trapped in your mind is an ugly radiance
Shivering from the heat of the unanswered calls
Traveling nowhere in the sun of the night
You become soaked from the wind as the rain falls to the sky
The thunder booms in silence as the flowers bloom into seeds
All the rivers run still and the sickness lies short
You grow weaker as time spends its sorrows in splendor
You live an empty life as it randomly chooses your fate
Lying in your unbloomed garden so peacefully loud
You never can define
Your unordained locality.............

Author's Note

JG, (between 2002-2003)

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Justin, this is beyond powerful

[Brian]

Very deep meaning, and the irony of everything is good.