Empty

I wrote this in high school. I'm not sure what grade.

Your heart seeks love
For it fills your life with passion
And love is what it finds
But you are still empty

Your mind seeks knowledge
And through the world you search
Now worldly knowledge lights your path
But still you are empty

Your body seeks strength
Because weakness is failure
Now you can lift up the world
But still you are empty

Your soul seeks salvation
But you are filled with worldly knowledge
Your mind ignores your soul
And still....you are empty

Author's Note

JG, 2002-2004

Reviews

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This write is so-so truthful. I really enjoyed this write.
I loved the fourth stanza the best. This is amazing!