What Now?

After all is said and done, what comes next?

Upon tranquil fields

Where crimson has long faded,

What is my purpose?

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up and well penned!

[raven]

it's a familiar feeling. very sweet. love it.

[Amber]

Sounded like a riddle. Mystery coiled in three lines

[~lost and in my fantisi..]

short and sweet and makes ya think!! very nice

[Raylene]

Impactful message love how it is sent in such a short message

[Dusk]

the simplicity of this amazes me👌🏽 what a powerful impact a few words can have!

[GalaxyGhost]

This paints a picture really well for its simplicity. I can imagine at the end of the day when a warrior has fought their last and the fields are red, what is the soldier to do next? That's at least what I found in this. I love haikus!

[Hyacinth]

Amazing haiku. It's extraordinary how so few words can sat so much, isn't it?

[TheRaven]

Sorry to take a while to reply! Been a long and exhausting week, the hell week of hell weeks! The right words in small amounts can certainly carry a world of weight. I'm always amazed by the things Hemingway did in his novels when it came to brevity.

[Hyacinth]

Ah, yes. And it's km :). I'd appreciate it if you could check out my work as well, though I'd understand if you can't.

[Hyacinth]

Spelling error:ok not km

[TheRaven]

It wouldn't be trouble at all, I'd love to check out your work and definitely will, send me a request (if you haven't already, it's possible I looked at one and lost the notice) or a private message so I can keep it as a reminder!